T3+Writing

My Dream House

My dream house has 40 room all with 4 glassy windows looking out at sea views and to the left two indoor netball courts, one volleyball court and a golf course with a pond and waterfall as the 18th hole. My house is painted white with yellow outlines as bright as the sun on all the edges with a fully covered yellow chimney going down into my cats special room where they lounge around and eat all day, they each have their own laz boys to sleep on. My dream house has three stories and on the top story there is a huge deck with a spa and a yellow slippery slide going down to my outdoor pool, every second room has a yellow crystal ceiling and a glass fish tank with lots of sea horses and nemo fish and other big fish two company me and my guests.

Monday 2nd August

WALT-  use a range of language features to write descriptive stories.

Include at least : 3 similies Write a mystery story about a sophisticated hippo 3 metaphors who likes to solve puzzles. 2 personifications 1 alliteration 3 onomatopoeia

Popo the very sophistictated hippo liked to put together thousand or more pieced puzzles, very hard puzzles that only scientists could put together out. One day Popo was working on a puzzle that had so many pieces that they could make up Popo himself inside and out, the puzzle that he was working on told a story it was of monkeys swinging in the trees and a temple in the background with two monkeys on the top holding a red gem as shiny as glass being washed three times a day, and behind that are dark clouds so dark ghosts can’t find there way through, the black clouds look like rain but are really the evil black monkeys wanting that gem to be able to become rulers of the monkey jungle. Popo was missing quite a few more pieces and just couldn’t find them, he had a feeling that they would be under big palm leaf right in front on him but knowing him he was too sophisticated like the queen to get down and dirty under it, but after a while he just had to go under the leaf and see if the puzzle pieces were there. ZAP Popo got hit by a lightning bolt on his back BANG there goes the thunder, “Owch,” Popo screamed, Popo couldn’t find the puzzle pieces and when he came back out from the palm leaf his puzzle was gone.